Venom and Earth Chapter One Preview

Hi all,

This week I haven’t been too well so I haven’t been very productive with my writing. But, with Elemental Dragons Book 2: Venom and Earth coming out in April I thought I would share a preview of the first chapter with you! If you haven’t read the previous book and don’t want to be spoiled I would recommend skipping this blog post.

Preview:

Peace doesn't last forever. I always seem to find out the hard way.

The screen in front of me is currently showing my worst nightmare. Helicopter blades whir overhead the cameraman as he points one gloved hand towards the beast in the sky.

Draca.

The orange dragon flaps its mighty wings, stalling the helicopter following it for a millisecond. They finally get ahead of it and it bares its teeth, growling at the people ahead.

"How did it get out?" Wes trembles beside me, his locket glowing a murky grey.

Wes is one of my closest friends in Aria, the first person I met outside my friends and brother. We’re both equally scared of our markings, the beacons that are currently leading Draca right to us.

I ignore the feeling of my skin burning around my wrist; it doesn't matter now. The silver bracelet on my wrist continues to burn, as if it’s warning me about what I’m about to face. Looking at that beast on the screen makes my back burn too; my markings are probably glowing. The markings that are lighting Draca's way. It knows where to go because of the markings on my back of my element, water. Now, it wants to swallow me alive to get my power.

"Hazel?" Wes shakes my arm feebly.

"I'm thinking."

"Me too. We need to hide."

"We can't hide from a monster that can track our markings." I hesitantly brush my fingers over the nape of my neck, feeling the warmth radiating from the royal blue swirls on my back.

As much as I want to run, there's nowhere to go. Camp walls are guarded; we won't be able to sneak past.

"Then what do we do? Wait for it to come and eat us?"

I glare at my friend, who trembles as the dragon lets out a roar so loud that it’s distorted on the live feed. "I don't know."

"What about the others? And Braith... She'll want revenge."

Braith has markings also, she joined our group a few months after it was formed. She’s given us so much information so far, she’s a valuable asset.

I sigh and tear my gaze from the screen. "What do you mean?"

"You and I both know that everyone at the lab is dead. It's all over the news! Olwen wouldn't have made it out. "

My heart thumps into my throat at the thought of Braith crushed by the death of her older sister. Wes is right. There's a strong chance she'll do something impetuous.

"We need to find her."

"You can. I'm not going outside with that thing flying around." Wes sinks lower in his chair as people around us start to chatter as the camera cuts out.

I'm not letting her get into trouble.

"Fine. We'll go by ourselves." I glance at my dragon companion, Aqueous, who nods in agreement.

I slink through the crowd, Aqueous gently pushing people out of the way with his bat-like wings. I'm glad there are no Premiers around to fine us. My commoner status means that I can be fined by the elite for even glancing in their direction. With Draca loose I suppose their ‘protectors’, people who watch over the Premiers, are too busy to worry about a few commoners like me getting too close,

Cold air blasts my face as I step onto the gravel path outside the library. The sky is grey and full of clouds that look ready to burst. Aqueous sniffs the air, his claws digging into the gravel.

"Can you smell it?"

The black dragon shakes his head, but his turquoise eyes won't meet my gaze.

"You're a terrible liar."

His eyes twinkle until a roar makes us both jump. It echoes around the camp, instilling a deep silence.

"We need to find her, now."

My companion puts his nose in the air once more, nostrils flaring. I let him lead as we walk through the empty streets. People duck into the nearest buildings, their eyes wide with fear. Although I'm scared, I need to find Braith. She's going to be devastated. I hear the whir of helicopter blades again, and quicken my pace to a run. Aqueous slows down to run beside me, his eyes darting between the sky and the path ahead. As we turn a corner, I recognise the black and white scales of Damayanti, Braith’s dragon. She is glaring at the sky, legs splayed and teeth bared. Next to her stands Braith, clutching a piece of pipe in her hands. Her face is wet with tears, and her hair is ruffled over her sweaty forehead.

"Braith!" I call out to her, but she doesn't acknowledge me. "Braith!"

"Fuck off, Hazel."

The fact that she used my proper name instead of the nickname she gave me shows that she's upset. Her gaze drops to meet mine, her brown eyes blazing with fury.

"Braith, we can't be out here."

The hum of the helicopter blades becomes louder; it will break through the clouds any minute. And Draca would too.

"I want it dead." My friend clutches the pipe so tightly her knuckles turn white. "Olwen is dead because of it."

"You don't know that. She could have got out–"

"No. Most of the building collapsed after catching fire. They've found bodies, not survivors."

I take a step forward but Damayanti bares her teeth, frosted breath flowing from her nostrils.

The helicopter spirals overhead, trailing smoke in its wake. It heads for the forest, disappearing behind the trees. Aqueous shields me from the strong winds as Draca's head breaks through the cloud first. Its long orange body follows, circling the camp in seconds.

It's the size of a skyscraper, with piercing amber eyes and dull orange scales. Chipped brown spikes stick out over its head and neck in all directions. Its claws are as long as my body and of a faded yellow. Its eyes lock on us below, its lips contorting onto a snarl. It flaps its wings once and lands gracefully in front of us in the square, squeezing its bulky body in between the shops surrounding it.

"Get 'im!" Braith snaps at her companion.

With a screech of fury, Damayanti leaps into the air, speeding towards Draca for an attack. Aqueous shoots after her, tackling her out of the sky yards from the beast's face. The two of them tumble on the ground, leaving scars in the pavement.

"No!" Braith screams, whacking my arm with the pipe as she rushes towards the great beast.

I shoot a blast of water at her feet, knocking her to the ground.

Draca lifts one leg, trapping Braith between its claws.

"Shit!"

I run forward, firing streams at the beast's head. It ignores me and starts to drag its hand across the ground towards its head, taking Braith with it. My friend tumbles helplessly between the clawed bars, getting covered in dirt and grime. Each claw leaves a large scar in the earth. Damayanti's angry roars ring in my ears as the beast lifts its hand up, hooking Braith's arm between rows of teeth.

"Hazy!" I hear the fear and regret in my friend's voice as the beast prepares to take off, with her dangling from its mouth.

"No!" I fire more water, but it bounces off the dragon’s orange scales harmlessly.

Flapping its wings, Draca launches into the sky, the force of its take-off knocking me backwards. When I'm able to open my eyes again, the clearing is empty.

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My 2020 Writing Goals

Hi all,

Following on from my year in review last week, I'm now doing my 2020 writing goals. They are as follows:

Write two books.

I'm hoping to write Celestial Plague Book 3: Purgatory and Years before the end of 2020.

Publish two books.

Elemental Dragons books 2 and 3 will be coming out this year! Venom and Earth in April and Glass and Ice in October. I will also be entering both of them in Cover Wars.

Get three covers designed.

I've already booked Deranged Doctor Design to do the covers for the next two Elemental Dragons books, but I also want a cover for the Celestial Plague Short Story Collection.

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Edit two books.

I would like to edit Elemental Dragons Book 4: Cinder and Fire and Celestial Plague Book 1: Nirvana myself before passing to my editor.

Write four short stories.

I haven't written a short story for a while and would like to get back into it. I'd also like to start dabbling in horror.

Get a short story published.

I would like to get one of my short stories published in a magazine or anthology.

Read 15 books.

I've already set my goal on Goodreads and I'm hoping that I'll be able to find time to read again, even if it's not as many books as last year.

Participate in Camp NaNoWriMo and NaNoWriMo.

Having a goal to work towards seems to work well for me, which is why I'll be doing NaNo again this year! I'm aiming for 50K each time, nothing crazy.

Thank you for reading! I would also like to thank everyone who voted for Blood and Water in Cover Wars, it came third!

See you next week.

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2019 Year in Review

Hi all!

Seeing as next week's blog post will be my 2020 writing goals, I thought that I would do a year in review for the last Sunday of 2019! 

Published Blood and Water.

My debut novel came out this year with the next one out in April 2020! It's been a great experience self publishing and I want to thank everyone who bought my book.

Sold 40 books.

I've sold 40 copies of Blood and Water, thanks to everyone who bought one!

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Wrote three books.

I set a goal for writing two books this year, but I managed three! 

Elemental Dragons Book 4: Cinder and Fire - 88,000 words

Celestial Plague Book 1: Nirvana - 83,000 words

Celestial Plague Book 2: Heaven - 83,000 words

Participated in July Camp NaNoWriMo and November NaNoWriMo.

I finished Cinder and Fire during Camp NaNo and Heaven during NaNoWriMo. I said last year that I would participate again, and I've enjoyed it. Now I'm just taking a break until the beginning of January to start working on Purgatory.

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Hired editor for two books.

My editor, Nicola, has edited two books for me this year. Elemental Dragons Book 2: Venom and Earth and Elemental Dragons Book 3: Glass and Ice. Venom and Earth is almost ready for publication as it is in the formatting stages, while I have only recently got the edits back for Glass and Ice. Next year I will be asking her to work on the final book.

Two cover designs.

Both Blood and Water and Venom and Earth have come to life this year thanks to Deranged Doctor Design! They both have gorgeous covers and I've already booked the next two books to be designed by them next year.

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Entered Blood and Water for a book award.

I've entered Blood and Water into the Wishing Shelf Book Awards. Wish me luck!

Read 30 books.

I've read 30 books this year, most of them being Warriors books. I've already got a little pile going ready to be read next year.

That's it for this week, come back next Sunday to read about my 2020 goals. See you next week!

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Perfect Cheap Gifts for Writers

Hi all,

I've seen plenty of posts about gifts for writers and I thought I'd create my own little list to help people out! I've seen some ideas range from cheap to ridiculously expensive. Like most people, I don't have loads of money to spend on just one present, so I thought I'd focus this post on cheap ideas rather than really elaborate ones. Although everyone has their own little quirks and hobbies, most writers would love to receive any of the following:

Mishka in her Christmas outfit last year

Mishka in her Christmas outfit last year

Books - The most obvious one. Who doesn't love books?

Vouchers - I personally love receiving vouchers for book stores or Amazon. It means that I can fill up my to be read pile again.

Magazine subscriptions - Tying into my blog post last week, buying a month or two subscription to a writing magazine is a great idea.

Book posters - Some authors sell posters of their books. If the writer is a huge fan of a certain author, consider a poster!

Bookmarks - Like posters, most authors sell bookmarks of their books.

Notebooks - Writers can get struck with an idea at any time, so a notebook is a great thing to have on hand.

Food - Get them some of their favourite food or a voucher to their favourite restaurant. Creatives need fuel to keep writing!

Stickers - Some people love decorating their laptops with little stickers to personalise them. There are loads of writing related ones you can buy.

Book merchandise - Whether they're published or querying, you can get some of their manuscript printed on mugs or scarves.

Art - If you're a great artist, you may want to consider doing some art of their book. Maybe one of the characters or your favourite scene.

Supply Kit - Maybe combine a few of the above into a basket or box to gift the writer.

Support - This one is free. Support the writer by encouraging them to keep going. It's the most important and valuable gift you can give them.

That's it for this week, I hope you enjoyed! I also hope everyone has a happy holiday as well, whether you celebrate or not!

See you next week.

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Why Authors Should Read Writing Magazines

Hi all,

This week I'm going to talk about writing magazines and why authors should read them.

There are thousands of magazines out there geared towards writers, filled with publication opportunities, author interviews and book trends. Some you have to pay for, while some are free. I'm subscribed to a few writing magazines and have even had a short story published in one. That's why I want to talk about why writers should read at least one.

Publication.

Writing magazines often hold a lot of competitions which gives readers a chance to have their work published. Depending on who you submit to, you could also get paid! The first time that I was ever published was in a writing magazine, and it's a good way to get you work out there and add to your writing portfolio.

Writing Tips.

Most magazines will contain writing tips from other authors. Although not all will work for everyone, you can try a few out and see if any techniques will work for you.

New Reads.

By reading a writing magazine you might find your next favourite book! There are hundreds of books featured in magazines every year that you might never have heard of.

Marketing Tips.

As well as writing tips you can also discover new marketing tips. There might also be opportunities to advertise your book within the magazine if you have the budget.

Some are free.

You don't have to pay to subscribe to some magazines, you can sign up to mailing lists or just read the online versions.

Writing Events.

Magazines are a great way to find out about writing events. You can find out about events close to you and see which authors are attending.

Book Trends.

You can see which genres are up and coming and what hasn't sold well so far. This can also help you see what agents are looking for and who you can submit to.

New Agents/Publishing Houses.

A lot of writing magazines will advertise new agents or publishing houses. Since they have only just started up they'll be looking for plenty of submissions and you could submit your manuscript if they fit your genre.

That's it for this week, hope you enjoyed.

See you next week!

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NaNoWriMo - November 2019

Hi all!

As promised, this week I will talk about how I got on with NaNoWriMo this year. This is the second time I've participated, but I had heard of it previously.

For those who don't know, NaNoWriMo stands for National Novel Writing Month. You are given a month to write 50,000 words. You can track your progress on their website and fill in your daily word count and when you are projected to finish. There are also forums to connect with other writers, who you can add as buddies.

My progress each day according to the tracker

My progress each day according to the tracker

This year I participated with the second book of the Celestial Plague series: Heaven. I had finished the first draft of Nirvana the month prior and wanted to write Heaven for NaNoWriMo. Before November 1st I'd already written 20K of my first draft, so I hoped that I could complete the entire first draft by November 30th.

By the end of the month I had written 61,908 words, bringing my overall total to nearly 83,000!

My overall word count

My overall word count

Last year I did an entire first draft in 30 days, which was tough. This year I decided to just write what I could.

My method:

- Goal: 2,000 words a day. (60,000 words by the end of the month).

- Write on my phone during my commute to work (bus): usually write between 600-1000 words.

- Write during my half an hour lunch break: usually write between 700-900 words.

- Write during my commute home (bus): usually write between 300-600 words.

- Anything left over I write at home.

My average word count

My average word count

I found a method that works for me and also means that I don't have to cram words in when I get home from a long day at work. This way when I get home I can relax. Although the whole process is difficult, I still love participating. I love having a goal in front of me and a chart to tell me how I’m doing. I’ll definitely participate again next year, as well as Camp NaNoWriMo.

Did you participate in NaNoWriMo? Did you hit the 50K target? Let me know in the comments!

See you next week!

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Venom and Earth Cover Design

Hi all!

If you haven’t seen my social media posts the cover for Elemental Dragons Book 2: Venom and Earth has been revealed! It has been posted to my Twitter and Facebook pages, and also on another author’s book blog:

https://suesbookblog.wordpress.com/2019/11/25/cover-reveal-venom-and-earth-by-jessica-turnbull/

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As with Blood and Water this has also been designed by the wonderful people at Deranged Doctor Design. (I got the Print Social package for those who are interested).

Like with Blood and Water, I thought I would explain a few key details of the cover:

The colour scheme is green and purple, to represent the title of Venom and Earth.

Hazel, the MC, is again on the cover.

The rocks are not being created by Hazel as she is not an Earth Elemental.

The rocks are being conjured by someone else, cornering Hazel.

The background is a forest, which comes into play later on in the book.

I liked the font from last time and kept it, as well as the colours.

Again, dragons aren’t in the background as I thought it would be too overwhelming.

That’s it for this week! Next week I’m going to talk about NaNoWriMo, how I felt during the entire process and how I managed to churn out 61,908 words in total.

See you next week!

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My Least Favourite Genres

Hi all!

A few weeks ago I did a post on my favourite book genres and I thought it was about time I posted the sister post: My least favourite genres.

Readers will always have genres that they don't particularly like, which is okay. We're all allowed to have preferences. Just because one reader doesn't like the genre, it doesn't mean there isn't someone out there who loves it! The following are the genres that I very rarely read and I'm not a huge fan of:

Romance.

I know romance is one of the most popular genres out there but I just can't get into it. I'm not a huge fan of romance being the centre of the plot and really struggle to read romance books because of it. While querying I was stunned to see how many agents would only consider romance and some agencies were built entirely on the romance genre. While i don't really see the appeal myself, I won't put anyone down for liking romance or writing about it.

Medieval.

Again, another genre that I just can't get into. Although some books do this quite well, others do not. I prefer books set in modern times to those set in the medieval era. Plus, I think it's a hard genre to write in due to people have warped conceptions of medieval times. A lot of things that people have seen on TV or at school just didn't happen, or it happened in a very different way.

Magic.

I used to love books about magic when I was younger, but I'm not a huge fan of them now. I've just found that there aren't many I can get into, as I don't like the magic system or the magic itself. Maybe one day I'll get back into them, but if not I don't really mind. There are some that I've read recently which are really good, but it's not enough to get me back into the genre.

Non-Fiction.

I'm just not a fan of many non-fiction books as I just love fiction so much. I'd rather pick up a fiction book and escape to a different world rather than read a biography. I will read non-fiction for research, such as Egyptian mythology books, but apart from that I don't really touch them.

That's it for this week, I hope you've enjoyed it. See you next week!

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How Dreams Can Influence Your Writing

Hi all!

This week I'm going to talk about dreams and how they can help your writing.

I've had most of my book ideas from dreams; including Elemental Dragons and Street Rats. Although I've adapted the story line slightly, it's still very much true to the original dream. I keep my phone by my bedside just in case I dream something up which I think would make a good book idea. Some are better than others, I've scrapped three book ideas because I just couldn't make them work despite dreaming them so vividly.

Characters.

Character appearances or names can come to you in dreams. Rocky was one of my dream characters that I put in several books before he found his place in Elemental Dragons.

Plots and subplots.

Although dreams can be crazy and unpredictable, some can give you a rough idea of a plot. You can then rework this so it fits in with the book or characters.

Writing blocks.

Sometimes we get writer's block, which is okay. Usually it's temporary and just puts us in a writing slump for a while. However, if you're thinking about your book a lot while you're awake, you might just be able to dream up a solution.

Covers.

As authors, we often spend far too much time thinking about what our book cover will look like. A specific colour or theme could come to you while you sleep.

Book names.

As I've mentioned in previous blog posts, Blood and Water wasn't the first name of my book. More like the third or fourth. I came up with half the name, water, while I was dreaming. If I hadn't then it might still be going through name changes today!

Book ideas.

A lot of my book ideas have come to me from dreams, which I have then changed to fit in with a story. The Curse of Anubis series started out as a dream about zombies, and has now turned into a four book series.

Sequels.

Dreams can often give you ideas for sequels, which you can then choose to write if you wish. Some ideas may just make no sense when you try to put them together, but at least you've tested out the idea instead of just jumping straight in.

That's it for this week! I hope you enjoyed the blog post, see you next week!

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Subjects to Add to Newsletters

Hi all!

Many authors who have a website have a mailing list attached to it. They might give away a free Ebook or marketing code to entice people to submit their email addresses. Anyone who signs up to my mailing list will get the free ebook: Elemental Dragons Short Story Collection, as well as getting monthly emails containing my newsletter.

Here's a link to sign up, and in return you get a free ebook!

https://www.subscribepage.com/jessicaturnbull

The cover for the Elemental Dragons Short Story Collection

The cover for the Elemental Dragons Short Story Collection

Some authors are unsure of what to add to a newsletter, so I thought I'd talk about a few examples. Some of which I use, others I don't:

News.

Updating your subscribers with monthly news is a good way to get interaction. You can ask them questions and also talk about events you might be attending in the future.

Blog posts.

You can use your newsletter as a way of reminding subscribers of any blog posts they might have missed. I add my latest four blog posts to my newsletter with links and pictures.

Cover reveals.

Using a newsletter is a good way to reveal book covers to subscribers before everyone else. You can give them a reward for signing up and also ask them what they think of the cover. If you have multiple covers you can run a poll to see which one your subscribers like most.

Writing excerpts.

Every month I add an excerpt of a short story or novel that I'm working on for my subscribers. Some of them I don't post online, so they are usually the only ones to see it. They can see my writing style in different genres and characters I might use again in the future.

Announcements.

If you have an announcement about a book coming out or a discount, you can let your subscribers know first. As fans, they may be able to drum up excitement for you.

Giveaways.

Hosting a giveaway will get you easy audience interaction. A signed copy of your book will garner a lot of interest and your subscribers could be the lucky ones to win it.

Posters.

For each Elemental Dragons book I will have a poster that I will use for marketing. I add these to the bottom of my blog posts and emails as a reminder to the audience that they can purchase a copy.

Events.

If you attend an event or are hosting one, you can let your subscribers know first. Some of them might be able to attend and meet you. If you're hosting an event yourself, your subscribers can help you get the word out.

Word of mouth.

A recommendation of your book is a great thing as it means that you can find more readers. If subscribers like your books, they will be more likely to tell other people and get them to buy them.

Book recommendations.

Recommending books to your subscribers gives another author exposure while also sharing what you like to read with your audience. I use this to recommend my favourite books in no particular order.

Advanced readers.

An advanced reader is someone who gets a copy of your book before the release date and gives honest feedback through a review. Emailing your subscribers to ask if they would be interested is easier than posting on social media. You know these people are your fans and would love to help you.

That's it for this week, I hope you enjoyed it! See you next week.

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